A great piece of writing advice is to write like how you speak.
One term for this is called using the “human-voice”.
Rather than stuffy corporate speak, the human-voice is open, relaxed, and confident.
A good test is to read your writing out loud. If it feels or sounds like it’s something a human wouldn’t say, it probably needs a re-write.
It can always be simpler, shorter, and infused with more of your personality.